Fri, 21 Jun 2019 Short stories
Today I'm going be talking about my short stories. It's going to be a story about “The Machine".
The characters in the story are:🏃
- Billy
- Serious lady
- Mr. Gigadosh
- Man in white coat
- Man in oily overalls
- ↖he reason i done that is because people keep thinking it says "Olly"
Here is what Billy did in the first paragraph.
Billy first started his job. He had a
small desk in a small room in the basement of the company's giant office building. He worked for the World Machine Company. His job was to come up with good ideas for cool new machines.
I have just finished reading my short story and am working on some slides, so next week I should have finished a few slides and I will post these up for you all to check out.
Who, What, Where, When and Why will all be revealed soon.
Blog ya soon
I have just finished reading my short story and am working on some slides, so next week I should have finished a few slides and I will post these up for you all to check out.
Who, What, Where, When and Why will all be revealed soon.
Blog ya soon
Kia ora Mauri
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kaitlin I am a Year 6 at Paihia school. Your story sounds really interesting, I can’t wait to see your slide show about Who, What, Where, When and Why. Have you done any more short storys? If you have time you could check out my blog at http://pskaitlinc.blogspot.com/. I can’t wait to read more of your posts.
Bye
if you ever come to see this blog again or see this comment im very sorry but i had other stuff to do and then we ended up having our holidays and bla bla bla. so i will maybe try do that another time and im very sorry. I also seen a few mistakes to so i will fix that. Also i hope you ever see this comment. good luck, bye👍
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Kieron and I go to Kawakawa Primary School and that was a pretty good short story and I cant wait until you post you other short story and I will check your blog next week to and make sure you check out my blog at https://kpskieronr.blogspot.com blog you later
ReplyDeleteKia ora Maori my name is Jorjah and I am a year 6 from Paihia School. I like your blog
ReplyDeletePost about short stories because people really underestimate short stories because they think you cannot have a story being short. But you added steps that can help the reader add detail into finishing a short story. Well what did you find hard? Keep up the good work.
Kia ora Mauri my name is Jorjah and I am a year 6 from Paihia School. I like your blog
ReplyDeletePost about short stories because people really underestimate short stories because they think you cannot have a story being short. But you added steps that can help the reader add detail into finishing a short story. Well what did you find hard? Keep up the good work.
Kia ora Mauri, I’m Zara a year 6 at Paihia Primary School. I enjoyed your post about short stories as it was short but it still gave me heaps of information. This reminds me about a piece of writing our class is doing at the moment which is writing in the limit of 100 words. Have you finished your slide yet? I can’t wait to see another one of your posts see you later!
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